mandag den 28. januar 2013

A day of my life


Hi my name is Julie.
I'm 21 years old, and I live in Miami in Florida.
I live in a beautiful house, which is just out to the beach. There's always very warm, and almost everyday I lay one or two hours in the sun. I love clothes, and shopping. There's also a lot of the biggest brand stores, just some blocks away from my house. And if you drive a little bit longer into the city, there is my work, at a music company. I'm a songwriter, we are a lot of big producers and musicians at the company. And we work with some of the biggest rappers and singers. My songs is mostly rap. And then I find out together with the producers, what the song is gonna sound like. I also play a little piano, so sometimes I have some piano ideas to my rap.
I truly love music. I hear music all day long.
But if I'm not at work, or laying in the sun.. Or shopping. I paint, or draw. My paintings is actually selling pretty good. But it's not from that, I've gotten rich and famous. It's like my two biggest dreams have come true. Painting and writing. I'm doing what I love for a living.
Now I'll tell you about how my day was today.
I woke up to the sun shining through my curtains. I made beakfast, egg and bacon, and toast with cheese, and some fruit. I heard a little music.
After I ate, I took on some clothes, a new top I just bought yesterday, and some shorts. I took my purse, my phone, and some papers and pencils, so I could draw. I took my sunglasses on, and then I went to the beach. I sat on a blanket, putted my music in my ears, and started drawing. As I sat there, I figured, some day I will paint the water.
After I had been on the beach for a little while, I drove into the city, and went to work. Yesterday I had gotten an incredible idea to another song. So I went to work, and talked to my producers about music to the song. After I had been to work, the clock was about 5 pm and I went shopping, after I had shopped a little. I went to a restaurant, met with some friends and ate. Then we hung out, and went to some party's and I met this incredible guy. And then we got really drunk, now I have a hangover.
And I'm gonna meet with the guy again saturday.

1 kommentar:

  1. Hej Julie
    Du skrev sørme meget, tør jeg sige lidt for meget, når du er over 100 ord over max bør du overveje at skære lidt ned, fordi til en eksamen trækker det ned hvis du skriver for meget.
    Det er dog tydeligt, at se du havde en historie, du gerne ville fortælle og det får du også gjort,ret klart og tydeligt, der er nogle grammatiske fejl der forstyrre læsningen lidt, men det var ikke det den her opgave gik ud på. Det den gik ud på at skrive en blog, hvilket du også gør, indtil cirka midtvejs hvor det begynder at virke mere som en dagbog, hvilket ikke var meningen med opgaven. Alt i alt, så får du fortalt en god historie ret godt, men for fremtiden, prøv at overveje hvad der behøver at være med i din tekst.

    Erik

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